For a minute, I well thought they were triplets until I realised it was Laura. I really like how you've done that with the image. Everything is really subtle and mellow which is nice and helps reflect the stroy. I don't really think there is much to change, perhaps putting something in the right corner as it seems a bit inbalanced, but other than that it's really good.
The images here and the mise en scene is excellent for your choice of magazine. It's all really relevent and I love the style overall! The colour scheme is still existent which I really like and I love how you have used boxes under the writing but decreased the opacity so it's easier to read. This double page spread would definately encourage me to read the story !
For a minute, I well thought they were triplets until I realised it was Laura. I really like how you've done that with the image.
ReplyDeleteEverything is really subtle and mellow which is nice and helps reflect the stroy.
I don't really think there is much to change, perhaps putting something in the right corner as it seems a bit inbalanced, but other than that it's really good.
The images here and the mise en scene is excellent for your choice of magazine. It's all really relevent and I love the style overall! The colour scheme is still existent which I really like and I love how you have used boxes under the writing but decreased the opacity so it's easier to read.
ReplyDeleteThis double page spread would definately encourage me to read the story !